思路點撥

　　本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的，中，一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：

　　第一段：描述;第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段：建議措施。

　　思維拓展

　　實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。

　　本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。

　　關(guān)于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。

　　高分范文

　　Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

　　However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

　　Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

　　佳作妙譯

　　水資源一度被誤認(rèn)為是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關(guān)注這一問題了。如圖所示，一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。

　　然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關(guān)水龍頭。更有甚者認(rèn)為自己繳了水費就有權(quán)浪費，與他人無關(guān)。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當(dāng)沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。

　　雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認(rèn)識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應(yīng)該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關(guān)于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲更好的生活。

　　思路點撥

　　本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的，中，一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐，正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴，像存錢一樣，存儲水滴。實際上，它儲存的不是水，它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此，本文可以這樣寫作：

　　第一段：描述;第二段：分析有些人浪費水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段：建議措施。

　　思維拓展

　　實際上，積極正面的圖片寫作，和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。

　　本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。

　　關(guān)于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個行文思路和語言模式進行展開。

　　高分范文

　　Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

　　However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

　　Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

　　佳作妙譯

　　水資源一度被誤認(rèn)為是一種無限的可再生資源，實際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關(guān)注這一問題了。如圖所示，一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢一樣。

　　然而，水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關(guān)水龍頭。更有甚者認(rèn)為自己繳了水費就有權(quán)浪費，與他人無關(guān)。事實上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富，很難想象當(dāng)沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。

　　雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認(rèn)識到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應(yīng)該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講，要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關(guān)于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲更好的生活。