2009年中考英語作文指導與訓練三：命題作文
三、命題作文訓練
A.寫人
1、以 My Mother 為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點：
① 媽媽是護士，在縣人民醫院工作。 她工作努力，工作中嚴格要求自己，因此，她的同事們對他評價很高；
② 2003年參加抗擊非典的戰斗。為了保護我們免受非典的侵害，一個多月沒回家。當時，我非常想念媽媽； ③ 我愛媽媽，并為媽媽而自豪。
參考詞匯：縣 county； 抗擊fight against； 戰斗battle； 非典 SARS；
My mother
My mother is a nurse. She works in the People's Hospital of our county. She works very hard. She is very strict with herself in the work. So her workmates speak highly of her.
In 2003 she took part in the battle to fight against SARS. She was away from home for more than one month. So I missed her very much, but I knew she was trying her best to protect us from SARS and she was doing an important thing.
I love my mother very much, and I am very proud of having such a great mother. I should learn the spirit of working hard and being strict in the work from her. When I grow up, I would like to be a person like my mother.
2、根據材料寫一篇關于運動員張怡寧的報道：
NameZhang YiningsexgirlCityBeijing
Birth1982.10.5height1.68mweight52 kilos
Achieve -ments六歲開始學習乒乓球， 在1999年45屆世乒賽上（the 45th Table Tennis World Championships）顯示非凡的實力，獲得亞軍。 在2004年的雅典奧運會（Athens Olympic Games）上奪得金牌。 在剛剛結束的國際世乒賽（ITTF）上奪得女子單打冠軍，成為乒乓球領域中的頂尖。
I'd like to introduce a girl to you. Her name is Zhang Yining. She was born in Beijing in 1982. She is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos. At the age of six, she began to play table tennis. In 1999, she won the second at the 45th Table Tennis World Championships. In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she won the first. And now she won the women's singles at the ITTF World Cup. She becomes the top of the table tennis field. We hope she will make greater progress in the future.
3、在初中三年的學習生活中，你一定交了不少好朋友，留下了許多美好的回憶。請以My Best Friend Tom/Mary 為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹一位你最要好的朋友，男生姓名用Tom；女生姓名用Mary統一代替。
內容要求：1、他/她的外貌特征和個性特點； 2、你們一起經歷的一件你印象特別深刻的事情。
注 意：嚴禁使用真實的校名和姓名
My Best Friend Tom
Tom is my best friend. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses. He is shorter but a little bit stronger than I am. In my eyes, he is a clever and brave boy.
One day we went to school by bus together as usual. The bus was so crowded at the rush time. Oh, my god! Where's my wallet? A woman beside us cried suddenly. We thought there must be a thief around us, and we tried to help her but failed in the end. The next stop was coming and the woman became more worried. Just then Tom rushed to the driver quickly and told him what happened.
All the passengers were taken to the police station and the thief was caught. We were late for class that morning; however, we felt excited at that unusual experience.
B.狀物
1、以My hometown為題，介紹家鄉的地理、氣候、風景、人文和風俗習慣等。字數約80個。
My hometown is in Kunming. Kunming is the capital of Yunnan province. Kunming is also a very beautiful city. It is called the City of Eternal Spring, because it has spring-like climate all the year round. The Crossbridge Rice Noodles are famous traditional food of Yunnan. There is a famous exposition centre in Kunming. It is in the northern suburbs of Kunming. The Exposition's theme is Man and Nature -Marching into the 21st Century. And in Yunnan there are twenty-six nationalities. It is a big family. Welcome to my hometown.
2、以My family為題，介紹家庭基本情況，字數約80個。
3、我市剛建成一座圖書館，請根據信息，用英文簡短介紹：
1、時間：竣工：2006年6 月； 開放：2006年7月
2、地址：在中山路，與科學博物館相鄰, 對面是公園。
3、館內設施：
三層會議室（22個座位）電腦室（50臺）
二層衛生間Room for storing Books (10萬冊)
一層咨詢臺閱覽室閱覽室Children's Home
A big library has been built for people in our city. It was finished in June, 2006. It will be open in July. The library is on Zhongshan Road, next to the Science Museum. On the other side of the road, there's a park. There are three floors in the library. On the first floor, there are two reading rooms, and there're many kinds of books in it. On the second floor, there is a washing room and a room for storing books. It has about 10,000 books. On the third floor, there's a big meeting room and a computer room. The computer room has fifty computers. Books are my best friends. We should love books. Because they give us knowledge and make us happy.
4、中國加入 WTO 后，有一大批外國人來我市--泉州參觀。假設你是導游，請根據以下內容，向外賓簡單介紹我市的情況。
要求： 1. 100 詞左右； 2. 要點包括： a. 有悠久的歷史，位于福建省的東部，離福州 198 公里，人口約 524 萬。 b. 有許多名勝古跡，如清源山；東湖等等；東湖是一個很美麗的地方，湖水清澈，無污染；湖中有各種各樣的魚；你可以到那里劃船，野餐，釣魚，是度假的好去處。你也可以去參觀市博物館，在那里你可以看到許多恐龍化石（ fossil ）。c. 祝大家在泉州玩得愉快。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Quan Zhou, now let me introduce our city -Quan Zhou to you. Quan Zhou is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 5,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Quan Zhou, such as Qingyuan Mountain, East Lake and so on. East Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Quan Zhou n Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Quan Zhou.
Thank you.
C.記事
1、根據中文提示和英文提示詞語，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。字數60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。 2、在路上我遇到了一個外國人。
3、他向我詢問去溫泉飯店（the Hot Spring Hotel）的路。
4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個轉彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。
5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。
提示詞語：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that
Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him.
D.議論
1、同學們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應的報道后，你感到最擔憂的是哪兩種情形？請簡述你擔憂的理由并提出建議或希望。要求：
⒈ 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述，不可多選或少選。
⒉ 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確；⒊ 詞數 80 ～ 100。
參考詞匯： 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
E.任務型小作文
1、Li Lei生病，去看醫生，請幫他描述病情，并幫醫生向Li Lei提建議。
Li Lei: I'm not feeling well today. I think I have a headache. And I have got a cough._____.(不少于2句)
Doctor: You should eat some medicine and lie down for a rest. You had better drink more water. Don't talk too much. (不少于3個建議)
2、小明和小華是在手拉手活動中結成的一對學習伙伴。前不久，小明來信向小華詢問如何學好英語。請你以小華的名義給他寫封回信。內容包括：
A、學習英語的基本方法 ( listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn...by heart; practice writing;...) ;
B.你的體會和其他建議。
詞數：80詞左右。信的開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Xiao Ming,
I'm glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English well. I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. You'd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should practice writing often. Of course there are many other ways.
You can also see English films, learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I'm sure you'll learn English well.
Yours,
Xiao Hua
3、假如你是泉州清源山風景區的管理人員，請你用英語為游客訂出一些規章制度，內容包括：環境衛生保護、森林防火安全、亂涂亂刻(crave)、樹木保護、人身安全等，至少5句。
Notice to the Tourists
1、Please keep the place clean and tidy.
2、Don't throw rubbish onto the ground.
3、No smoking is allowed.
4、Don't use fire on the mountains.
5、Don't cut down the trees
6、Don't crave on the trees.
Please be careful when you climb up and down the mountains.
三、命題作文訓練
A.寫人
1、以 My Mother 為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點：
① 媽媽是護士，在縣人民醫院工作。 她工作努力，工作中嚴格要求自己，因此，她的同事們對他評價很高；
② 2003年參加抗擊非典的戰斗。為了保護我們免受非典的侵害，一個多月沒回家。當時，我非常想念媽媽； ③ 我愛媽媽，并為媽媽而自豪。
參考詞匯：縣 county； 抗擊fight against； 戰斗battle； 非典 SARS；
My mother
My mother is a nurse. She works in the People's Hospital of our county. She works very hard. She is very strict with herself in the work. So her workmates speak highly of her.
In 2003 she took part in the battle to fight against SARS. She was away from home for more than one month. So I missed her very much, but I knew she was trying her best to protect us from SARS and she was doing an important thing.
I love my mother very much, and I am very proud of having such a great mother. I should learn the spirit of working hard and being strict in the work from her. When I grow up, I would like to be a person like my mother.
2、根據材料寫一篇關于運動員張怡寧的報道：
NameZhang YiningsexgirlCityBeijing
Birth1982.10.5height1.68mweight52 kilos
Achieve -ments六歲開始學習乒乓球， 在1999年45屆世乒賽上（the 45th Table Tennis World Championships）顯示非凡的實力，獲得亞軍。 在2004年的雅典奧運會（Athens Olympic Games）上奪得金牌。 在剛剛結束的國際世乒賽（ITTF）上奪得女子單打冠軍，成為乒乓球領域中的頂尖。
I'd like to introduce a girl to you. Her name is Zhang Yining. She was born in Beijing in 1982. She is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos. At the age of six, she began to play table tennis. In 1999, she won the second at the 45th Table Tennis World Championships. In the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, she won the first. And now she won the women's singles at the ITTF World Cup. She becomes the top of the table tennis field. We hope she will make greater progress in the future.
3、在初中三年的學習生活中，你一定交了不少好朋友，留下了許多美好的回憶。請以My Best Friend Tom/Mary 為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹一位你最要好的朋友，男生姓名用Tom；女生姓名用Mary統一代替。
內容要求：1、他/她的外貌特征和個性特點； 2、你們一起經歷的一件你印象特別深刻的事情。
注 意：嚴禁使用真實的校名和姓名
My Best Friend Tom
Tom is my best friend. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses. He is shorter but a little bit stronger than I am. In my eyes, he is a clever and brave boy.
One day we went to school by bus together as usual. The bus was so crowded at the rush time. Oh, my god! Where's my wallet? A woman beside us cried suddenly. We thought there must be a thief around us, and we tried to help her but failed in the end. The next stop was coming and the woman became more worried. Just then Tom rushed to the driver quickly and told him what happened.
All the passengers were taken to the police station and the thief was caught. We were late for class that morning; however, we felt excited at that unusual experience.
B.狀物
1、以My hometown為題，介紹家鄉的地理、氣候、風景、人文和風俗習慣等。字數約80個。
My hometown is in Kunming. Kunming is the capital of Yunnan province. Kunming is also a very beautiful city. It is called the City of Eternal Spring, because it has spring-like climate all the year round. The Crossbridge Rice Noodles are famous traditional food of Yunnan. There is a famous exposition centre in Kunming. It is in the northern suburbs of Kunming. The Exposition's theme is Man and Nature -Marching into the 21st Century. And in Yunnan there are twenty-six nationalities. It is a big family. Welcome to my hometown.
2、以My family為題，介紹家庭基本情況，字數約80個。
3、我市剛建成一座圖書館，請根據信息，用英文簡短介紹：
1、時間：竣工：2006年6 月； 開放：2006年7月
2、地址：在中山路，與科學博物館相鄰, 對面是公園。
3、館內設施：
三層會議室（22個座位）電腦室（50臺）
二層衛生間Room for storing Books (10萬冊)
一層咨詢臺閱覽室閱覽室Children's Home
A big library has been built for people in our city. It was finished in June, 2006. It will be open in July. The library is on Zhongshan Road, next to the Science Museum. On the other side of the road, there's a park. There are three floors in the library. On the first floor, there are two reading rooms, and there're many kinds of books in it. On the second floor, there is a washing room and a room for storing books. It has about 10,000 books. On the third floor, there's a big meeting room and a computer room. The computer room has fifty computers. Books are my best friends. We should love books. Because they give us knowledge and make us happy.
4、中國加入 WTO 后，有一大批外國人來我市--泉州參觀。假設你是導游，請根據以下內容，向外賓簡單介紹我市的情況。
要求： 1. 100 詞左右； 2. 要點包括： a. 有悠久的歷史，位于福建省的東部，離福州 198 公里，人口約 524 萬。 b. 有許多名勝古跡，如清源山；東湖等等；東湖是一個很美麗的地方，湖水清澈，無污染；湖中有各種各樣的魚；你可以到那里劃船，野餐，釣魚，是度假的好去處。你也可以去參觀市博物館，在那里你可以看到許多恐龍化石（ fossil ）。c. 祝大家在泉州玩得愉快。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Quan Zhou, now let me introduce our city -Quan Zhou to you. Quan Zhou is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometers away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 5,240,000.
There are many places of interest in Quan Zhou, such as Qingyuan Mountain, East Lake and so on. East Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Quan Zhou n Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Quan Zhou.
Thank you.
C.記事
1、根據中文提示和英文提示詞語，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。字數60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。 2、在路上我遇到了一個外國人。
3、他向我詢問去溫泉飯店（the Hot Spring Hotel）的路。
4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個轉彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。
5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。
提示詞語：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that
Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him.
D.議論
1、同學們，看到下面的四幅圖片及相應的報道后，你感到最擔憂的是哪兩種情形？請簡述你擔憂的理由并提出建議或希望。要求：
⒈ 從所給素材中任選兩種情形進行闡述，不可多選或少選。
⒉ 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確；⒊ 詞數 80 ～ 100。
參考詞匯： 建議 suggest v. suggestion n.氣體 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
E.任務型小作文
1、Li Lei生病，去看醫生，請幫他描述病情，并幫醫生向Li Lei提建議。
Li Lei: I'm not feeling well today. I think I have a headache. And I have got a cough._____.(不少于2句)
Doctor: You should eat some medicine and lie down for a rest. You had better drink more water. Don't talk too much. (不少于3個建議)
2、小明和小華是在手拉手活動中結成的一對學習伙伴。前不久，小明來信向小華詢問如何學好英語。請你以小華的名義給他寫封回信。內容包括：
A、學習英語的基本方法 ( listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn...by heart; practice writing;...) ;
B.你的體會和其他建議。
詞數：80詞左右。信的開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Xiao Ming,
I'm glad to receive your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English well. I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. You'd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should practice writing often. Of course there are many other ways.
You can also see English films, learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. I'm sure you'll learn English well.
Yours,
Xiao Hua
3、假如你是泉州清源山風景區的管理人員，請你用英語為游客訂出一些規章制度，內容包括：環境衛生保護、森林防火安全、亂涂亂刻(crave)、樹木保護、人身安全等，至少5句。
Notice to the Tourists
1、Please keep the place clean and tidy.
2、Don't throw rubbish onto the ground.
3、No smoking is allowed.
4、Don't use fire on the mountains.
5、Don't cut down the trees
6、Don't crave on the trees.
Please be careful when you climb up and down the mountains.
